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The second thing is more of a nit-pick, really. You've got some great highlighting and shading going on in this pic, which really brings out the texture of the coat and makes the lightsaber look like a light-source, and I like that. However, many parts of the picture lack any kinds of shading or other details, especially the chest area and the left arm, making them look very flat and out-of-place compared to the rest. Which is a shame, as you're pretty good at using shading for dramatic effect.
Third and last is the diagonal slash-belt-thingie on his shoulder. No matter how much I look at it, I can't figure out wether it's wrapped over the shoulder or if it's somehow going *into* him. It really confuses me.
I apologize if I sound harsh, that's not my intention. You're a great artist, better than me, so I just wanted to give you some amateurish advice. Hell, I wouldn't know posing and shading if it jumped up and bit me in the ass, that's for sure.